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Past and Present

Walking down memory lane,
Reminiscing everything with haze,
With all that had been before,
And what it has become of now.

The wind the way it used to rage,
And how it turned into a craze,
All the flowers that blossomed before,
Have now, withered to the core.

The once bright and clear rays,
That fell and lit up every place,
And now a dull beam of light,
Where it falls, no one knows.

The shadows behind us all the way,
Being there whether sad or gay,
Leaving us now and going astray,
Where they will go, is unknown till this day.

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  1. Date: 3/9/2011 10:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Fiona. Love Carol

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 4:05:00 PM
    Your poem explains, 'Beauty is in the eye of the beholder" beautifully... Thank you, these are words of beauty to be very proud of in a humble sort of way

  1. Date: 2/21/2011 1:32:00 PM
    Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week on PoetrySoup Fiona. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/7/2008 8:03:00 AM
    This is marvelous Fiona. Everything does grow hazy with time, and when we see a reminder and look back...well you've penned it masterfully. I look forward to more of your work. My best, Charlie

  1. Date: 7/7/2008 6:27:00 AM
    Very nicely done. Rhythm and flow nice..Great write. Message conveyed nicely. Continue to share.