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Passion's Lustful Cape

     "Passion's Lustful Cape"




Selfish motives tempted heart
you threw caution to wild wind
Passion's lustful cape,  Choked our sweet love drape
broken pieces wound for you have sinned.

Selfish feelings robbed two souls
carved in stone from childhood intertwine
Choked our sweet love drape, Passion's lustful cape
cloaked in sorrow as tears feast to dine.

Selfish emotions raged on
careless whispers uttered through long night
Passion's lustful cape, Choked our sweet love drape
smothered breath until out of sight.

Selfish ways destroy persona
yet you made me a stronger lady
Choked our sweet love drape, Passion's lustful cape
found love without Gentleman Shady.

*Dec. 21, 2012


*For Su Crouse  Contest. 

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Skat A Date: 3/13/2014 3:19:00 AM love the passion...... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~ Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/15/2013 9:10:00 AM Linda, my sweet bbf another nice win... , :-) Congratulations in Suzette's " ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... " contest. Take care... PD Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/13/2013 1:23:00 PM Great winning work..Congrats on your top win..Sara Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 1/12/2013 6:46:00 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 1/12/2013 5:53:00 PM Lovely words Linda......Seren Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/12/2013 5:05:00 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win, Linda! Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Tim Ryerson Date: 1/12/2013 4:27:00 PM I have to agree with Carrie...you are Poetry Soup's lady of passion...congratulations are definitely in order and I hope you are feeling better - Tim Login to Reply

Carrie Richards Date: 1/12/2013 2:33:00 PM Passion is your speciality!! Congratulations once again....hope you are doing better! Login to Reply

James Nichols Date: 1/12/2013 2:06:00 PM wow, this is like "you oughta know..." very well-done. Hell hath no fury... Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 1/12/2013 11:47:00 AM It is so sad when love is betrayed. Congratulations on yur win. Hoping to hear how you are doing. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 1/12/2013 11:35:00 AM Linda-Marie~ lovely. SKAT Login to Reply

Debra Squyres Date: 1/12/2013 10:33:00 AM Passion wins most times, not always with good rewards. I really enjoyed reading your poem...well thought out. I see congrats are also in order, so Congratulations on your winning spot in the contest. Well done !! Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/12/2013 9:38:00 AM Way to go, congratulations on well deserved win. Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 1/12/2013 7:42:00 AM Congratulations on you winning spot Linda xx Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 1/12/2013 6:32:00 AM Congratulations on your superb win in this contest,Linda-Marie..Great write...Thumb up for you,Friend...XOXO.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/21/2012 7:25:00 PM Hello, Linda my bff,, love the dodoitsu,,, thank you for the kind comment in my poem,, you are 2 sweet... xox~pd Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/13/2012 11:03:00 PM this is a very worthy topic to discuss in a dodoitsu such as this one, Linda. I really enjoyed reading this one especially with that stuff coming up for me in maybe 8 years. (if I still am eligible for social security stuff by then) I'm so sorry for all your problems, dear. are you asking TPS really nicely and explaining the exact problem? Do you use explorer? If so, stop it right away and change to google chrome. I had problems before using chrome. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 11/13/2012 12:10:00 AM I think this is a splendid entry into Debbie's contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this far superior and very masterfully written poem this evening! What a powerful and extremely real piece Linda-Marie, Great Work!! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/12/2012 10:22:00 PM WE VISIT MANY SENIOR FACILITIES ESPECIALLY DURING HOLIDAY SEASON AND MANY QUESTION THOSE GOLDEN YEARS AS THEY SIT AND WAIT FOR DEATH .. SOME SICKLY BUT OTHERS SIMPLY DEPRESSED ON LIFE' OUTCOME ..SO MY THOUGHTS POETS ..LUV .. Login to Reply