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Passionate Pink Crocus -- Sequence

pink
nose peeks
prettily
through her worn, white
sheet.
bold
Crocus,
breathing wind,
and the promise
of
new
green grass –
painting her
thawing landscape
pink.




*Inspired by Mr. Brian Strand's new Lanterne, as is moment, Contest. :)

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Date: 4/30/2009 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place finish! I knew this was a winner the first time I read it. Wonderful use of imagery! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 1/18/2009 9:35:00 AM

Kirstin Congratulations on your wonderful first place win!! Excellent write! Love Laura :)

John Heck

Date: 1/18/2009 9:00:00 AM

Dear Kristin - Congratulations on your WIN in Brian's contest! Peace and hugs, J

Elaine George

Date: 1/17/2009 3:49:00 PM

Dear Kristen, Congrulations on your first place win. Truly and amazing lanterne. Very beautiful an vivid. You are a master of all forms. Love and peace, Lainie

Constance La France

Date: 1/17/2009 12:40:00 PM

congratulations on your first place win.. constance

Sharon Winter

Date: 1/17/2009 11:31:00 AM

This was AWESOME and a well deserved First Place win! Congratulations Kristin! YAY!!!! Love, Shar xoxo

Robin L. Gass

Date: 1/17/2009 7:29:00 AM

A well deserved 1st place win for this awesome piece of poetry, Kristen. Sorry I missed it before. You paint such a beautiful picture of the comming spring here. Congratulations! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/17/2009 6:16:00 AM

What a gorgeous poem. I missed it before ...can see how it won Brian's contest!!!! Congratulations....outstanding beauty with this lovely lanterne~ :) Love Carrie