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Below is the poem entitled PASSING THROUGH CLOUDS which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Her heart crashed on the stairway with a pound but not one star blinked to descend or touch the distant tremble as coal night grew long, as murmur signed through whispers down the floor. A trail of pages blew in feathered wafts yet imprints of their silence still remained. The words were gentle and addressed with love Delivered not, will clawed pain matter now? A woman lived alone and passed through clouds that no one tended how she glazed old weeds. The tunes of berry months were never hummed, as if the strings of twilight plucked a life The crashing stars, the page, and gentle weeds though shortened in presence, were not relieved; for time became a thief wearing cloaked breath like sighs untold in hushed tones to the breeze
for Debbie's Let Get Serious Contest by nette

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  1. Date: 9/15/2012 11:01:00 PM
    Hi Nette,, Congratulations in Debbie's " Let's Get Serious " awesome contest. ~ :-) always a pleasure in reading all winners when I get the chance. super xox's from~ PD

  1. Date: 9/11/2012 10:32:00 PM
    Congrats Nette... :) cheryl

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 8:57:00 PM
    Hey, nette, I have not seen you in a while. ARe you ok? DId you know Joe ended up in ER? I know you have those bad lung/sinus problems too? Scary stuff!!Anyway, I am so glad to see this one on the winners' list. Congratulations. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/10/2012 6:32:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in this contest "Let's Get Serious" Nette. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 2:28:00 PM
    I can see this happening and to me frightening! Congrad's on your Serious verse winning. This is an important issue to draw attention too. Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 9:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your big win nette xx

  1. Date: 9/9/2012 1:37:00 AM
    Excellent write,Nette...Great job..Congrats on your superb win in this contest...

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Beautiful ride... lovely. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 9:10:00 PM
    Beautiful ride... lovely. Congratulations on your win. Well done Lee

  1. Date: 9/8/2012 6:01:00 PM
    Congratulations nette. Enjopyable read. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 2:03:00 PM
    Thank you for the entry nette. Light & Love [soup mail]

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 12:11:00 PM
    Hello again to my fav. poet!...Some quick trivia...I was stationed in Subic Bay from 1969 to was our overseas home port from where we did tours of duty in the Tolkin Gulf...I will NEVER forget my experience there and also the opportunity to visit places like Singapore and Bangkok...priceless!...I understand the old Naval port there was destroyed by a volcano??...I hear that now Subic Bay is a big tourist attraction...One of my dreams is to go back to visit there again!

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:49:00 AM
    fab one... liked it

  1. Date: 9/5/2012 6:07:00 AM
    fascinating aura surrounds this poetic art Nette luv .. most creative tale from beginng to ending .. feeling the emotion luv .. so deep ..

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 7:28:00 PM
    Nette, your poem is very beautiful... stopping by real quick,,hugs...pd

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 4:58:00 PM
    Very creative and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading your work this eve...Thanks for stopping by my blog..Doris was on soup awhile today..She must be feeling some better..Sara

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:29:00 AM
    What a beautiful and yet a very sad poem. The first line of your third verse is outstanding.Thanks for posting this one, Jancarl

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:13:00 AM
    Mercy me, usual I had to read this over a few times more to let it sink in...'a trail of pages blew in feathered wafts'...Wow! - Tim

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 10:08:00 AM
    Once again, I'm in awe of your writing skills...this is just so marvelous...It actually floats on the page !! Delightful read over late morning coffee.

  1. Date: 9/4/2012 8:20:00 AM
    A classical poem this is nette, awesome.