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Passing Through

She's an unfinished Lady in the shadows;
Sometimes she does not know the game,
Or the rules of play...
A sleeping princess waiting for her turn
A waking dreamer with no key to fame.

I know her well...
She has my face.
I hold her hands on a twilight patio
And watch stars shooting sparks
With comet tails
That spell her name
Across a Southern sky.

No one sees but She - no one understands.
She knows the Universe
Cannot proclaim reality;
Her reality or Her immortality...
The outward shields -
However insignificant
Are still, by rites around Her heart.

And the sky will fall
Before She...
I know Her well, you see.

Copyright © elizabeth landon-lane

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  1. Date: 11/3/2012 5:55:00 PM
    You write splendidly, you know her very well, and you know how to bring out her beauty, enjoyed your poem this evening, hope your doing well and staying strong, remember, you can't keep a good woman down, so chin up and love live laugh, and rejoice for each and every day is a precious gift, xxx vie

  1. Date: 11/3/2012 2:06:00 PM
    I really liked the quality of this one..Very creative on your part..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara

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    Date: 12/17/2012 1:15:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I am always so glad when my words touch something deep in makes me feel my efforts are not just wasted words filling up time! Thank you! Elizabeth
  1. Date: 11/3/2012 1:46:00 PM
    A nice poem' Sandy