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Passing Through

She's an unfinished Lady in the shadows; Sometimes she does not know the game, Or the rules of play... A sleeping princess waiting for her turn A waking dreamer with no key to fame. I know her well... She has my face. I hold her hands on a twilight patio And watch stars shooting sparks With comet tails That spell her name Across a Southern sky. No one sees but She - no one understands. She knows the Universe Cannot proclaim reality; Her reality or Her immortality... The outward shields - However insignificant Are still, by rites around Her heart. And the sky will fall Before She... I know Her well, you see.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/3/2012 2:06:00 PM
I really liked the quality of this one..Very creative on your part..I am glad that I chose it to read today..Sara
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Elizabeth Landon-Lane
Date: 12/17/2012 1:15:00 AM
I am always so glad when my words touch something deep in others...it makes me feel my efforts are not just wasted words filling up time! Thank you! Elizabeth
Date: 11/3/2012 1:46:00 PM
A nice poem' Sandy
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