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party - for one

party....for one

so many people
yelling, drinking - only I 
hear the clock...


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  1. Date: 7/5/2014 4:20:00 PM
    oh, love this thoughtful, clever write, Susan. Thanks again for the PM - will try holding a contest soon. Have a lovely weekend x

  1. Date: 4/1/2014 4:04:00 AM
    Cindarella momnet? You are going to my fav poets. So there.

  1. Date: 4/10/2013 1:07:00 PM
    seems as if your waiting for someone and time is passing and still no date?, enjoyed this one Susan, wanted to thank you for your comment on my write Angel Wings, hugs-x, Royal

  1. Date: 3/31/2013 4:20:00 PM
    love this thoughtful write, Susan - thanks very much - loved the bench contest. Have a great Easter

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your Senryu..I would be the one hearing the clock..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..Sara

  1. Date: 3/27/2013 1:36:00 PM
    Nicely written Susan. Thank you for your interesting contest and for my no. 1 shared win. It was fun. Love, J

  1. Date: 3/26/2013 8:32:00 AM
    tick tick. Sometimes it seems like I'm the only one not whooping it up. Great poem in a small package.

  1. Date: 3/24/2013 8:44:00 AM
    - A party with much noise ...... well done, B.E.S. - Have a lovely Easter. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/9/2013 1:46:00 AM
    yes, this is really good, Susan!!! I'm waiting for more!

  1. Date: 3/8/2013 3:25:00 PM
    hum.... them appointments are making my head twirl. i guess when i'm stuck in a party like that the clock ticks, for me to run like that Cinder, girl, into my own little world... anyways.. I'm way off base... ha ha but aren't we all.... PS... read my comment to you on my latest poem... i thought it was funny...pd

  1. Date: 3/4/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading your work this morn..It has left me with questions..Sara

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 5:21:00 PM
    at LAST she puts one up!!! And ME LIKEY!!! You are so good at these down to earth senryu, Susan, and tankas too.

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 12:45:00 PM
    One can feel alone in a crowd Especially when sober and aware Enjoyed your senryu Susan xxx

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 9:31:00 AM
    This is a tremendous senryu my friend, I loved reading this awesome poem! What a perfect idea for a piece, Great Work!!