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Paradise Lost

World To hide Feel free To smile To cry Just to be No one around Just me and my thoughts This is my paradise But paradise is lost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/9/2012 7:40:00 AM
So true...it is quite difficult to find this "paradise" in our hectic world, but when we do..........it is bliss !! Congratulations on a thoughtful poem!
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Date: 7/8/2012 6:06:00 PM
Angelika, congratulations with your wonderful win -xox~pd
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Date: 7/7/2012 9:08:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:44:00 PM
awesome piece, congrats on your win
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Date: 7/6/2012 10:30:00 PM
I am reading some mighty fine poems on Brian's winners' list. Congratulations. you deserved a big win.
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Date: 7/6/2012 8:43:00 PM
Congratulations on a great poem and win, Angelika. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/6/2012 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian's contest Angelika. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2012 9:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win Angelika
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Date: 7/6/2012 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem.
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