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Paradise Found

Walk with me into a paradise... Up steps to where hearts shall rise... Rhyming letters and strumming tunes... Flowing dreams like floating balloons... Floors of love with untouched peace... Where a poets world could drip with ease... Take a ride on this Ark of dreams... Over land to sea we connect like streams... inspired by Sukmawati Komala's dreams.. now my dreams too..

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/8/2012 10:55:00 PM

yes I am.... and why aren't you asleep... zzzzzzzzzzzzz ...LOL...pd

Dinda Minardi

Date: 10/27/2012 9:21:00 AM

Yes, who would've thought that paradise is on our lover's eyes :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/16/2012 2:29:00 PM

Well done here Michael, I think those dreams have done the best inspiration possible..!

Carol Eastman

Date: 10/16/2012 2:10:00 PM

Great imagery and journey... You are obviously a very gifted writer. All of your poems I've read today say it...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/8/2012 9:48:00 PM

Michael, your poem is amazing, i love the walk, this poem lit up everything inside of me. I guess i do come with light. I love your bottom couplets, it is a very clever line. I have to say one of your best lines, and images. Extremly amazing... xox~pd

The Situation

Date: 9/23/2012 4:08:00 PM

they are the best dreams

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/23/2012 11:33:00 AM

full of lovely metaphors! Thanks for stopping by my writes. Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/23/2012 9:06:00 AM

such beautiful words to dwell on Michael luv ..dreams r so precious and real to those of us who believe in them .. always a treasure to read your lines luv .. JG in Nana mode as new grandson arrived yesterday .. xoxo .but I feel not one minute older ..haha..

Joann Grisetti

Date: 9/22/2012 5:16:00 PM

I like your ark of dreams. And Yasmin's comment is almost a poem in itself.

Michael J. Falotico
Date: 9/22/2012 5:43:00 PM

Joann~ Yassssss is to kind. xxx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2012 1:30:00 PM

It really is beautiful like a dream, Michael. Way to get inspired!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/22/2012 6:43:00 AM

I just love the line, "Where a poets world could drip with ease..." it says so much with just one line! I enjoyed this poem so very much Michael it brought a huge smile to my face my friend! The whole write is phenomenal, I love it! Fabulous piece, Great Work!!