Paper Boat

paper boat--
how far will it carry
my child's smile






© kash poet (kashinath karmakar)


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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/18/2020 2:20:00 PM

back to let you know, this is your THIRD most popular poem at Soup!! I'll always love this one. Do you think you could start posting up poems and be here permanently again. I miss the good old days!

Tim Peterson

Date: 4/8/2018 10:01:00 PM

Wonderful

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/7/2014 11:00:00 AM

This sure is a beauty, kash! I really enjoyed the thought you put in here, of how long that paper boat can give happiness to your child... And I hear you are getting all these awards for your haiku, I'm really happy for you! Congrats for all your accomplishments! Also want to greet you happy happy birthday! Enjoy your day and God bless you! :)

Surishiva Kumar

Date: 7/8/2014 2:22:00 PM

Hello Kash I am new to this place. I love Haiku. I have published my first Haiku here under the title 'Pareidolia'. Please see when time permits and offer your valuable comments. Paper boat has a tonne of sentiments loaded in it.

Kim Merryman

Date: 6/25/2013 1:59:00 PM

I love this, Kash! Great haiku! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

John Posey

Date: 6/25/2013 10:43:00 AM

Kash, you touched the heart of every parent with you winning haiku entry.... I'd say paper boats are buoyant into eternity. Congratulations, my friend.... Jake

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/25/2013 6:47:00 AM

Hardens my childhood memories. Kash congratulations on your fine Haiku. A well deserve win my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer

Date: 6/24/2013 8:13:00 PM

love it! congrats on a well-deserved win!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/12/2012 8:56:00 PM

just dropping by for a quick hello. Hope you find some time to write, Kashinath!!

Gail Debole

Date: 8/25/2012 6:55:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Jack Horne

Date: 8/24/2012 2:46:00 PM

beautiful haiku, Kash. Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Gwendolen Song

Date: 8/24/2012 7:33:00 AM

....as far as his vision can reach, Kash....how relaxing, this park setting write! :) gwendolen

Modupe Sefunmi

Date: 8/24/2012 4:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kash!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/23/2012 9:18:00 PM

KASH, congratulations with your awesome win... always~ pd

Joyce Johnson

Date: 8/22/2012 11:05:00 AM

A beautiful win. Stopping by to say thank you again and I have posted my corrected version. Love, Joyce

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/21/2012 8:20:00 PM

Congrats on your first place win, Kash! This is a precious haiku. I love it and I love the new avatar. What an adorable pout! Love and Blessings, Rhonda