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palm court

he palms the mountains
burnishing the pointed peaks
she groans with desire

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  1. Date: 6/20/2013 11:20:00 AM
    Hi Debbie. Not sure if I fully grasp this one.... But, it makes me think that there are more than one level of interpretation to this one. Regarding my haiku, The Twisted Tree: The final line referring to the mirage highlights the heat/sharp light (also, life....), where the twisted tree creates an interesting focal and concrete point -remembering that shadows look darkest in the presence of sharp light..... It is a bit philosophical as well - but I leave that up to the reader. Love, Su

  1. Date: 6/13/2013 3:28:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win..Sara

  1. Date: 6/7/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Hi Debbie, is there a double meaning here---hehehe--Kudos!

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 9:43:00 PM
    Great erotica here! Keep it up! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 8:54:00 PM
    Congrats, Deb. it was good and hot.

  1. Date: 6/5/2013 7:16:00 PM
    Debbie congratulations on your great win. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:42:00 PM
    nice win

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:38:00 PM
    Debbie, a bit naughty, very evocative senryu, congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 3:35:00 PM
    This is awesome. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 11:18:00 AM
    Still so hot to the touch!!! The smoke got my attention!!

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:43:00 AM
    Congrats on your my friend in the contest with this lovely poem. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 6/4/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning place Debbie xx

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 6:06:00 AM
    Sensual indeed.

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 11:18:00 PM
    Hi has been a long time, but the first poem I read on my return and I am again blown away by you the genius. Loving this charismatic sensual piece. One love JoyW

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 4:41:00 PM
    Sensual one..If for a contest, it will surely win in my book..Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest..I don't know when I will be able to get in there and do congrats..I am behind on everything..Sara

  1. Date: 5/31/2013 9:33:00 AM
    Whew........!! love the title too !!! A senyru that sizzles! ps........many thanks, Deb, for my placement in your "tough" contest!! Cyndi is a STAR !!! Wow.....she knocked it out of the park !!!! Kuddos to her....and to you for getting the best out of her musings!

  1. Date: 5/30/2013 12:15:00 PM
    Beautiful three lines Debbie, soupmail xxx

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 2:42:00 PM
    YES! All dates should go this way. :) Excellent!

  1. Date: 5/29/2013 1:23:00 AM
    wow, a sexy one!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2013 3:19:00 PM
    Hmmm...I like burnishing.