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Pal in a Tumbler

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Pal in a Tumbler

When the world disappoints
When your friends let you down
When the package’s too small
When the aches won’t subside
When the suds seem too dull
When your choice show gets axed

There’s always Bud Light
or bourbon on ice
Perhaps a Mai Tai
Maybe some fine wine
Cup of therapy

You’ll have a pal
in a tumbler
That won’t fail you
Won’t disappoint

Your aide will
pick you up
off the floor

chum and


***For David's Contest

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  1. Date: 7/15/2012 8:16:00 PM
    Like the way you write but found out that life is always worse with the slightest bit of alcohol because it is an illusion on a bottle.

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 11:13:00 AM
    SOUP MAIL!!!

  1. Date: 6/25/2012 2:57:00 PM
    sometimes it does help..for awhile!!! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:48:00 PM
    good to see you on the winners' circle, nats.. congrats with smiles and huggs! :)

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Natalie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 2:21:00 AM
    It's kind of a weird place to seek solace but you put it so well it seems so natural. Congrats on your win Natalie!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Natalie xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:38:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:34:00 AM
    NAt~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day, pd

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:04:00 AM
    Nat, pour yourself a little drink, thanks for entering and well done...David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:58:00 AM
    Hey, cutie, it's good seeing this one again on the winners' list right where it belongs. Congrats to you!

  1. Date: 6/16/2012 6:36:00 PM
    I love that show Cheers as well...very creative poem here..I can agree!! Lol. good luck in the contest!! :)

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 2:01:00 PM
    A toast to you for this great write! Cheers and good luck...Tanya

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 1:30:00 PM
    A perfect poem for David`s Contest, Natalie.- Wish you luck and hope for a win for YOU! - Have a lovely week. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:17:00 AM
    I'll drink to that... ;-) Very nice & good luck... Terry

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:55:00 PM
    Ok, so I'd better go see what a hexaverse it, but I really just like this cause it tells a great story.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:33:00 PM
    this is really unique, Natalie. I love how you kept saying when .... in the first stanza. It made the whole thing so fun and interesting to read. So glad you are back. I gave you some soupmails if you didn't know.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:24:00 PM
    Great advice! LOL! Malbec for me. Good luck in the contest, Nataly! Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 8:08:00 PM
    Enjoyed your poetry tonight Natalie, hugs vie

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 7:47:00 PM
    Now I can hear it as well. Well done poem.Best of luck in the contest.