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Painted Sky

When I looked outside my window There was a man painting snow I asked him "Are you friend or foe?" And he laughed and ran away In his hand he had a paintbrush In the other, a painted pail Running up onto an invisible rail He leapt up to the sky, hand outstretched high. I saw his brush strokes trailing black I cried, "Stop! Don't do that! I don't want today to end I have chores and things to mend" Once more his laughter came And he drew out a gnarly cane Dipping the end into the pail And left silver stars in a trail Then he used his brush again Curving a line to meet its end Forming a moon that was gleaming I am certain she was beaming Then the man ran once more And through the black he tore Leaving a silver stream of light behind As the words, make a wish, echoed through my mind

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/26/2012 10:45:00 AM
I knew a painted lady who I thought was kinda shady. But your man up in the sky with a twinkle in his eye. Paints so beautifully with light in the middle of the night.
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Date: 11/30/2011 8:17:00 PM
Very descriptive and imaginative with impressive rhyming.
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