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Painted Horses Leaping

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Painted Horses Leaping

~^^^^~ Painted horses leaping, faster and faster, I hold on tightly as my tangled hair is flying. A sweet carnival memory of a childhood summer. Painted horses leaping! The amusement park is twirling and whirling, of this horse, I alone, am the master! Father is holding me, to keep me from falling. My dappled horse is quite a leaper! The Merry Go Round is now gently slowing. "Can I ride it again, please father? Painted horses leaping! _______________________________ August 16, 2013 Roundel(not listed on this site) Written by Broken Wings (Constance La France) Submitted to the contest, Carousel In Roundel, Nette Onclaud

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  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:37:00 PM
    love this one - I could see this so clearly - so glad it's a winner

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 4:05:00 AM
    Congrats on your great win..I enjoyed reading this one today..I don't know how I missed it before the contest..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:55:00 PM
    Broken, a lovely win in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest....SKAT

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 4:11:00 PM
    Yes beautiful..congratulations

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 1:09:00 PM
    Just wonderful Constance!I love it.Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 8:16:00 AM
    Stunning piece, congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:22:00 AM
    Constance, great memories and a well deserved win!

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 11:44:00 PM
    Congrats ... I loved it .......Seren

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 8:19:00 PM
    So sweet...congrats on your success in this contest. BG

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 7:30:00 PM
    I really enjoyed this most Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 4:34:00 PM
    Hi Constance, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Charming dear heart! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 3:01:00 PM
    Constance, I love how you did yours and how you made it about a young girl wanting to ride her horse again! Congratulations on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 9:03:00 PM
    You have shown the beauty of the carousel that rests within a child's eyes! This is a gorgeous poem my friend! I just loved reading this enlightening piece this evening! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 6:19:00 PM
    This is simply awesome. Felt the life and energy and really like the format. Well done :)