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Pain Dissolver

I took the magic pill of life -
My gran and dad were 'live again;
I woke next morning with my wife:
The magic pill dissolved my pain.

For Russell’s Pill of Life contest, 6th February

Copyright © jack horne

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  1. Date: 5/22/2013 8:20:00 PM
    Jack wonderful, enjoyed this, short but sweet.

  1. Date: 2/26/2013 1:55:00 PM
    Jack, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA

  1. Date: 2/24/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Many congratulations Jack xx

  1. Date: 2/23/2013 8:16:00 PM
    So sad Jack, well one ....Seren

    Date: 2/23/2013 8:17:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Oops i lost my D .....sorry
  1. Date: 2/9/2013 4:12:00 AM
    very sad Jack, yet excellent poetry...

  1. Date: 2/7/2013 8:25:00 AM
    sorry to hear about your wife jack! I like the idea of a pain dissolving pill - one that worked and you never had to take another pill again... good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Best wishes for the contest, Jack with this short but lively piece. One love, Joy Wells

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 9:05:00 PM
    Another very good entry for the contest, best wishes for the Winners' List! Great job. Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 6:00:00 PM
    Very very nice. Good luck...

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 3:23:00 PM
    oh my, you put it personally and I think it is one of the BEST I have seen in his contest. So much better than my stupid sonnet I wrote. I hope it scores high, my friend and I hope you recover from the emotional pain. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:32:00 PM
    very good poem - short and to the point!

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 2:31:00 PM
    Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your work that is close to your heart..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 1:50:00 PM
    I need this pain dissolverrr.. JK.. Jack, I know you mean well... always~ LINDA