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Pain Dissolver

I took the magic pill of life -
My gran and dad were 'live again;
I woke next morning with my wife:
The magic pill dissolved my pain.

For Russell’s Pill of Life contest, 6th February

Copyright © Jack Horne | Year Posted 2013

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Sheri Fresonke Harper Date: 5/22/2013 8:20:00 PM Jack wonderful, enjoyed this, short but sweet. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/26/2013 1:55:00 PM Jack, a nice winning poem..thank you for sharing..LINDA Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 2/24/2013 10:11:00 AM Many congratulations Jack xx Login to Reply

Seren Roberts Date: 2/23/2013 8:16:00 PM So sad Jack, well one ....Seren Login to Reply Seren Roberts Date: 2/23/2013 8:17:00 PM Oops i lost my D .....sorry

Harry Horsman Date: 2/9/2013 4:12:00 AM very sad Jack, yet excellent poetry... Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 2/7/2013 8:25:00 AM sorry to hear about your wife jack! I like the idea of a pain dissolving pill - one that worked and you never had to take another pill again... good luck in the contest :) Login to Reply

Joy Wellington Date: 2/6/2013 10:58:00 PM Best wishes for the contest, Jack with this short but lively piece. One love, Joy Wells Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 2/6/2013 9:05:00 PM Another very good entry for the contest, Jack...my best wishes for the Winners' List! Great job. Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Donna Jones Date: 2/6/2013 6:00:00 PM Very very nice. Good luck... Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/6/2013 3:23:00 PM oh my, you put it personally and I think it is one of the BEST I have seen in his contest. So much better than my stupid sonnet I wrote. I hope it scores high, my friend and I hope you recover from the emotional pain. Luv, Andrea Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 2/6/2013 2:32:00 PM very good poem - short and to the point! Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/6/2013 2:31:00 PM Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading your work that is close to your heart..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 2/6/2013 1:50:00 PM I need this pain dissolverrr.. JK.. Jack, I know you mean well... always~ LINDA Login to Reply