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Below is the poem entitled Overcast which was written by poet Deneen White. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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upon looking
at the sky
a torrential
downpour was

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  1. Date: 9/25/2008 10:53:00 AM
    Deneen Its as thoughI see the darkened clouds now before me, well done!! Laura :)

  1. Date: 9/25/2008 7:26:00 AM
    Love those dark ominous clouds just before a storm. Especially when the wind picks up and there is a feeling of electricity in the air. Great write. Love, Shar

  1. Date: 9/24/2008 8:31:00 PM
    I can really picture this in my mind, love the rain and a good down pour. if I'm inside. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments your so kind.