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Outstanding Gem

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Outstanding Gem

The cloud murmurs as the sun
gaze intensely on the surface of the sea;
The sky throws up a beautiful golden piece;
which falls into the sea of seas,
To compete and synchronize with other
stones at the bottom,she must be perfect;
Polished and rinsed repeatedly by sea water,
She turns to a brilliant gem,
brilliant stone appreciated by all,detested by few.

Her words,character and  poetic prowess are unique,
which makes her meticulous and friendly with no huge physique,
Pretty,passionate,sincere and warm this I must say,
A lady of indomitable will , blesseth is your day,
A stallion out of many millions of land beasts,
fighting for freedom and world peace with her fists,
Her compassion,good intent and skills I love to see,
which have helped many out of doldrums and set them free.

         What else does such a being
           Blessings!,Accolades ,or Gifts!
             Hmm! I say 'all' ;
           She is :

*This poem is a mixture of  Personification,Rhyme ,free-verse and Acrostic,and it is 
specially dedicated to Debbie Guzzi*


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  1. Date: 8/6/2014 9:40:00 PM
    Olusegun, Congratulations, In Carol's Unsung Hero Contest. LINDA

  1. Date: 8/2/2014 6:49:00 AM
    Aww that is awesome well done!

  1. Date: 8/1/2014 11:44:00 AM
    Congrats to you! BG

  1. Date: 8/1/2014 5:29:00 AM
    Come again to congratulate you on this win, Olusegun

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 8:59:00 AM
    Big congrats to you! Merry Christmas in advance!

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 4:12:00 AM
    A wonderful poem, loved it. Congrats Olusequn, Merry Christmas!!

  1. Date: 12/24/2013 12:49:00 AM
    Enjoyed your beautiful write on a portrait of a poet and congratulations on the win, Olusegun

  1. Date: 3/7/2013 4:00:00 PM
    Outstanding, Olusegun. Congrats. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 3/6/2013 9:36:00 PM
    OLUSEGUN, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 1:50:00 PM
    OLUSEGUN, , Congratulations with your FUN LOVING POEM for Debbie's "It's MY Birthday " contest bash... had fun reading all her happy dandy winners. Always~ xox~ PD

  1. Date: 10/2/2012 4:00:00 AM
    This is lovely! Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:45:00 PM
    you put a lot of work into your poetic gift for Debs. And I 'm glad she put us all on her winners' list so we could see your poem here!! Congrats!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 10:44:00 AM
    extraordinary, olu.. super congrats on your win and huggs!

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:55:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Olusegun. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 2:14:00 AM
    Congratulations I can see Debbie really liked this one too xx

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:02:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 11:00:00 PM
    Many congrats olusegun for this win.

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 12:42:00 PM
    Thank you from the bottom of me heart. It's such a joy to watch your writing bloom! Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 10:56:00 AM
    I will try to live up to all this praise [my goodness ;)]//line 3 the word vomit did bother me though Aro..perhaps [throws up] would give the say idea with less negative association? BIG BIG HUGS!! THANKS LIght & Love

  1. Date: 9/22/2012 3:02:00 AM
    beautiful poem, Olusegun! I am sure Debbie will love it! hugs, Catie :)