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Outside It Rains

Your hair is moistened from mist of rain Your feet nudges mine Outside it rains air and water dance Upon the roof like wings beating Love me as you love the rain sing to me softly as you sing to the rain Sing to me with a moist kiss for yours is the face of night in your eyes lies unhurried lightning Together we shiver and burn Compelled by your fingers of flame waves of water surge your breath Love me closely as the rain pours each droplet sings a far away message announcing the night as it arrives in our bed Enter falling footsteps of the rain footsteps of water that dampens your eyes lips of water that caress my forehead We lay drenched and burning with fever The rain speaks softly like the wings of endless bats no-one but us is going to listen but us...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 1/18/2014 10:54:00 PM
Ken What a passionate and loving write. I could feel the burning desire in every line. Nicely done Thanks for the great comment on my Chaos poem.
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Ken Carroll
Date: 1/18/2014 11:12:00 PM
Thank you Robin..
Date: 8/31/2013 11:06:00 AM
Hello Ken, Nice to meet you and read some of your lovely writings. You seem to be a man in love. Nice words and flowing in such a beautiful style. Keep it up...Thank you for visiting me. Come back again. As Always, Shar
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/31/2013 11:34:00 AM
Hi Sharon, Thanks for visiting and leaving a lovely comment.. Regards, Ken..
Date: 8/1/2013 3:28:00 PM
- Well done.. this poem I like a lot Kenneth. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ken Carroll
Date: 8/1/2013 4:11:00 PM
Thank you Anne for visiting and your kind words... Ken..

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