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Outside Influences

The pair couldn’t see beyond the present
Such hope, great expectations
Children, a home, great love
 
It was what they could not foresee that hurt
She holds their wedding photo
The war took him from her
 



Entry for Dr. Ram Mehta's contest Wedding is one of the special events in marriage

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Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 5/18/2011 2:07:00 AM A poignant write, and one which is just as valid today as in former times. Young men (and women) still die in wars. Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 4/10/2011 12:21:00 PM Hi Diane, this is such a beauty.. I see that it won in Dr. Ram's contest as well. Congrats on your first place ;-) btw the search is on for volunteer footsie players hehe.. enjoy your day further and thank you for your comments always ;) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/5/2011 9:36:00 PM Diane, this is the first one I think I saw that addressed this topic within the theme of wedding day. VEry nice. Congratulations on a top win! Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 4/4/2011 1:53:00 PM A well-deserved first Place Win, Diane! Congratulations! Always, Annalise Login to Reply

John Loving Iii Date: 4/4/2011 10:42:00 AM thank you for sharing the first place in the contest Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/4/2011 7:29:00 AM Big congratulations to you for your first-place win! It is sad but very meaningful. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/4/2011 6:03:00 AM Congratulations on your win Diane in the contest "Wedding is one of the special events in marriage" sponsored by Dr. Ram Mehta. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/4/2011 2:38:00 AM beautiful in its paim, diane.. toppers list with big congrats on the highest win! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 4/3/2011 7:07:00 PM What a sad yet very real write, Diane-- this one is really touching-- Super congrats on your win! Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/3/2011 6:13:00 PM Congrats Diane on your first place win in the wedding contest with this fantastic write luv.. enjoy your top spot .with luv.. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/3/2011 4:14:00 PM You're looking good up there at the top Diane. Congratulations on your worthy poem's first place honor. Quite a touching verse friend. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/3/2011 3:07:00 PM Congratulations on the first place win in my contest, Diane Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/29/2011 4:29:00 AM Thanks for the entry, Diane Login to Reply

Shani Fassbender Date: 3/22/2011 2:33:00 PM Very poignant story; and so true for so many. Login to Reply