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Outrun My Fate

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Outrun My Fate

I can see a crystal mountain collasping in my rear view mirror ---
There isn't any sound, which makes it very surreal ---
So I increase the speed of my vehicle and gaze ahead ---
In order to catch up to my destiny and outrun my fate.

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  1. Date: 5/10/2010 12:56:00 PM
    A very interesting picture you create here, sheol. Almost profound! I like it! I notice you never changed that word in the sweet rose poem. It's petals for flowers and pedals for bikes. YOu can click on "my poems" and find what you want to change in any poem you have posted, and then change your typos and click update at the bottom when you are through. Maybe you already know that. Just leting you know in case it's new for you. So many things nobody taught me here. I had to learn myself! Andrea

  1. Date: 3/17/2010 6:14:00 AM
    Deep and interesting , Shoel , as ever and well done . I had a car like that , once , but I soon got rid of it ( he he heee !! ) . Beanacht Lá Fhéile Pádraigh duith , which is the Irish for ; Happy St. Patrick's Day to you . Tks for your kind words and write onnnnnnnnn ....