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Out On the Veranda

Warm sunshine did beckon come out North wind did threaten chill Hummingbird windchime played a tune But it was cold on the hill Just a few minutes with nature Enjoying bird calls fine See the effect of sun, wind,_rain 'Pon the tall Georgia Pine

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Date: 3/11/2013 6:36:00 PM
Yes still cold on the hill, but not for long.... lovely Sara
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Date: 3/11/2013 6:01:00 PM
when i lived in Atlanta my uncle had an expression "high as a georgia pine"
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Date: 3/11/2013 3:19:00 PM
Lovely, Sara. You always remind us of the wonder that is around us. Well, different natural wonders here than where you are, but wonders none the less. Lovely choice of words. Thanks for the visit, Hugs@
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:56:00 PM
That is such a lovely sight, the sun, wind, and the rain, all at one time is an experience to have! And I have experienced all three at once before, and the northern winds are very chilling! I have seen Georgia pine, and they are majestic in their stature my friend! You poem was a grand experience, something I am glad to have read! What a spectacular piece, very awesome write, Great Work!!
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Date: 3/11/2013 2:50:00 PM
love this lovely write, my friend - I can imagine all this
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