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Out of the Blue

Suddenly, silently, in the depths of an azure ocean they appear from out of the blue, Hearts beat faster as we are surrounded and fear makes adrenalin course through our veins As one, we watch them glide gracefully around us, and one can’t help but feel the Reverence and wonder of being among these menacing, magnificent creatures, these Killers of the seas; glorious natural predators, often vilified for their nature, and who to many, are misunderstood Suddenly, silently, just as they came, they disappear back into the blue leaving nought, but a sense of loss. For the In Search of the Human Mind contest - topic 'Awe'

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Date: 10/15/2010 11:37:00 AM
JANETTE, Congratulations! On having your poem featured this week. A poem well deserved, keep the fascinating poetry coming" Nathan D."
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Date: 10/15/2010 9:36:00 AM
GOOD MORNING! JANETTE, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT"
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Date: 10/12/2010 5:13:00 PM
Congrats Janette, on "Out of The Blue" being featured. Vince
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Date: 10/12/2010 2:18:00 PM
Jannette, hello & Congratulations! On your awesome & well done poem being featured this week: ) have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/12/2010 6:30:00 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week Janette what a great way to have it seen. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2010 3:39:00 PM
Congrats Janette on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all my friend with luv.. hope u are well.. enjoyed your blog a while ago..luv..
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:35:00 PM
congratulations Janette on your success with this "awe"some poem. great work....Margaret
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Date: 5/2/2010 9:35:00 AM
This is really good. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 5/2/2010 8:55:00 AM
This story of sharks (I believe, could be barracuda or another viscious species) is absolutely awesome, Janette. Big congrats on taking second place. Well deserved. Really enjoyed your poem! Love, carolyn
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Date: 5/1/2010 9:47:00 PM
Congrats janette on your 2nd place win in Constance's contest with your perfect poem for your assignment... enjoy your very special victory...luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/9/2010 9:08:00 AM
Janette, pretty awesome poem Girl. As Amy commented, your words have captured the shark in wonder > good luck in the contest >> James
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Date: 4/6/2010 10:56:00 PM
Amazing write, I am especially exalted because you chose the shark as your theme for "awe". This was phenomenal.
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Date: 4/6/2010 8:49:00 PM
Beutiful writing here, Janette. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/5/2010 11:42:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Janette.Rgds Brian
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Date: 4/5/2010 9:01:00 PM
Oh, you lucky ducky. I wish I had been given this assignment. I can't get myself even going on mine yet. haha. Anyway, love this one. Andrea
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Date: 4/5/2010 3:45:00 PM
yes perpetual eating machines! shiver...Light & Love
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Date: 4/5/2010 11:25:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poetry today Janette. Please continue to write and share with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/5/2010 6:59:00 AM
Good search! Nicely done. P.D.
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