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hysterical lights flash out of sync from her tree.... she can't remember laughter in the snow, only a grave beneath it ______________________ For Contest: Sad Tanka Sponsored by Andrea and Susan

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/14/2013 8:25:00 PM
So sad, but creative write. Congrats, Carrie!
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Date: 12/13/2013 7:56:00 AM
speechless.....
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Date: 12/12/2013 3:41:00 PM
WOW, all I can say, this was MY very favorite!!!!! (hope susan's too!!!)
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Date: 12/12/2013 9:11:00 AM
I am in awe...
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Date: 12/12/2013 8:12:00 AM
Oh my! This is stunning. The sadness is powerful and leaves one gasping. Congrats on your win. You deserve it!
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Date: 12/12/2013 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie
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Date: 12/12/2013 12:20:00 AM
so sad... congrats for the win.
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Date: 12/11/2013 11:43:00 PM
Very stirring. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Gary
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Date: 12/3/2013 2:42:00 PM
That IS sad...very cool at the same time though. How's it goin, gal?
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Date: 12/2/2013 6:32:00 PM
So very sad, dear Carrie! Good luck in the contest! Love and big hugs... xoxox
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Date: 12/2/2013 9:14:00 AM
Damn, how sad & intense. Our heart trying to connect with the joy of Christmas and its winter's breath...only to be haunted by past downfalls. This was so powerful.
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Date: 12/1/2013 9:38:00 PM
Nice entry, Carrie
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