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out of sync

hysterical lights
flash out of sync from her tree....

she can't remember
laughter in the snow,
only a grave beneath it

For Contest: Sad Tanka
Sponsored by Andrea and Susan

Copyright © Carrie Richards

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  1. Date: 12/14/2013 8:25:00 PM
    So sad, but creative write. Congrats, Carrie!

  1. Date: 12/13/2013 7:56:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 3:41:00 PM
    WOW, all I can say, this was MY very favorite!!!!! (hope susan's too!!!)

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 9:11:00 AM
    I am in awe...

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 8:12:00 AM
    Oh my! This is stunning. The sadness is powerful and leaves one gasping. Congrats on your win. You deserve it!

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:12:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 7:09:00 AM
    Congratulations Carrie, on your first place win, you tell a story like nobody's business, sending you love and a hug for the season, keep that pen steaming, xxx

  1. Date: 12/12/2013 12:20:00 AM
    so sad... congrats for the win.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 11:43:00 PM
    Very stirring. Congratulations on a well deserved win. Gary

  1. Date: 12/3/2013 2:42:00 PM
    That IS sad...very cool at the same time though. How's it goin, gal?

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 6:32:00 PM
    So very sad, dear Carrie! Good luck in the contest! Love and big hugs... xoxox

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 9:14:00 AM
    Damn, how sad & intense. Our heart trying to connect with the joy of Christmas and its winter's breath...only to be haunted by past downfalls. This was so powerful.

  1. Date: 12/2/2013 4:52:00 AM
    Nice poem Carrie, good luck in the contest....peter

  1. Date: 12/1/2013 9:38:00 PM
    Nice entry, Carrie