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Our World Today

The rose It shines As big as stars at night My tears have created this miracle But how I'm nothing Imma mistake My soul It sparkles As a boy gives me love As I have never felt before It's like A melody Inside me The Hummingbird It's harmony Is like nothing I've heard before Is this what earth is? A melody A harmony Never heard

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2015 2:01:00 AM

extremely awesome

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/4/2015 1:57:00 AM

Alyssa, I enjoyed reading this good and old verse tonight:-) Wishing you a fun safe 4th of July. ~luv~ LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/9/2013 12:52:00 PM

Alyssa, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/8/2013 11:40:00 AM

- Hello Alyssa, very well written. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)

Poet Tacito

Date: 7/2/2013 7:50:00 AM

What gripping emotions here. You presented some very thought-provoking images. Excellent!