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our name still together

divorce letter---
our names still together
on the bark of a tree


not my story :)

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  1. Date: 5/1/2012 1:40:00 PM
    Lovely juxtaposition. I am a fan of your haiku.

  1. Date: 4/29/2012 3:25:00 AM
    So glad you put not my story. Very poignant piece. Great write. Huggs TLee

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 2:41:00 PM
    This WAS MY STORY!!! You do engraving too?..haha You have such a knack at these modern haiku...I do hope that one day you will write a book and do an entire chapter on your wonderful haiku....I can just see it now....don't forget the footnote for this chapter..."I dedicate this chapter to my nutty American friend, Gwendolen." She harassed me until I finally wrote this book! :) " ha ha.

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 1:36:00 PM
    enjoyed reading this one again Kash ;)

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 10:35:00 PM
    oops I spelled it wrong , it's wilberforce. Strange name to remember. How had you heard of that man? I saw the movie about him many years ago. He was an awesome man in British history.

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 10:33:00 PM
    Wilburforce is for Brian's contest. It's hit and miss with him. I never know what of my stuff he will like. I am curious to see if he is fond of Wilburforce!!

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 10:21:00 PM
    This is very nice, Kash. Maybe you could say names, in the plural.I am thinking when two people engrave something on a tree like Tony loves Mary. So it's two names. Sweet one!!

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 3:57:00 PM
    Not my story either.....who owns it then? It is well written. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 3:33:00 PM
    This is very nice!! enjoyed your Haiku.

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 2:23:00 PM
    glad it's not your story. it is a little gem, though. nice one!

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:58:00 PM
    Exceptional style you used to pen love. Loved always, bl

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:31:00 PM
    what a difference the start of a love makes, akshi buddy!!... awesome 'ku... come over!..:)

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    Date: 4/22/2012 1:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    KASHI... :)
  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:14:00 PM
    Well written... Succinct but powerful.

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 1:08:00 PM
    good thing it is not your story, that would have been sad. it is a very good haiku, with lovely imagery. hugs, Catie :)