Get Your Premium Membership

Our Love Song

The full moon, sweet prelude to our tune of the melodious song of love. Your racing pulse, the drowsy passion it must move. so my heart will melt with just a sweet look you give. My love, tonight we will sound the gong, to sing for so so long, our love song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 8/25/2012 1:36:00 PM
Modupe, was this the one for Nette's contest. I know you are rethinking some of your contest entries. Be sure to read all the rules of their contests. For example for Nette's you have to put lots of extra information with your entry. this is a lovely poem but in case it is one you meant for the contest, the lines with incorrect syllable count are lines 3,4,and 7.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs