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Our Love Song

                                                             The full moon,
                                                      sweet prelude to our tune
                                                   of the melodious song of love.

                                  Your racing pulse, the drowsy passion it must move.
                                  so my heart will melt with just a sweet look you give.

                                             My love, tonight we will sound the gong,
                                                        to sing for so so long,
                                                            our love song

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  1. Date: 8/25/2012 1:36:00 PM
    Modupe, was this the one for Nette's contest. I know you are rethinking some of your contest entries. Be sure to read all the rules of their contests. For example for Nette's you have to put lots of extra information with your entry. this is a lovely poem but in case it is one you meant for the contest, the lines with incorrect syllable count are lines 3,4,and 7.

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:14:00 AM
    Beautiful and breathtaking, this is how poetry should be, hugs vie