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Our Love Ascends to Heaven

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Our Love Ascends to Heaven

Heaven awaits til our last waltz amongst the wind, mimicking that of yesterdays...(Sigh) Nature applauds as we continue in harmony; never ceasing til the last tear. Dust we form... transcending to Heaven
Pace, G INK-U-SCRIPT 09/05/2013 Contest Title: Just Nine Lines Visual #1 1st Place Winner

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  1. Date: 4/24/2014 11:08:00 AM
    Never heard of this form!! But no matter the form it's the poem that rules and this does and flows in the form. Perfect way to conclude this in peace.

  1. Date: 3/15/2014 1:57:00 PM
    short, but cute and incisive... This is a lovely piece with deep lines. Thanks for the priceless share

  1. Date: 2/10/2014 4:07:00 AM
    I love the sigh you put on there... that just explains how we feel if we are told and wish of heaven. I'm loving your poems

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 12:03:00 PM
    This is truly beautiful, a most enjoyable read, and a well-deserved win! (Many thanks for visiting my page, your kind comments are much appreciated)

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 10:14:00 AM
    very very beautiful write.all the best for the contest.

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 9:27:00 AM
    A wonderfully written poem. Super. best wishes Linda x

  1. Date: 9/16/2013 4:52:00 AM
    sigh, this is just heavenly, pace... congrats on your shining win in my contest!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 10:08:00 AM
    A lovely win Ink...... always love LINDA

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 7:07:00 PM
    Nine lines of true beauty,,,,lovely write ink :0) ~<3~ cherie

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 1:33:00 PM
    This is excellent! Enjoyable read!!! Cindy

  1. Date: 9/12/2013 8:05:00 AM
    well done with the beauty from your pen. congrats ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:31:00 PM
    Beautiful write! Congrats on your 1st place win! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:03:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 9/11/2013 8:39:00 AM
    congrats on this a amazing powerful poem,,

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 8:12:00 PM
    nicely done...the image took us in similar paths....congrats on your win :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 5:27:00 PM
    Congrats on your great win. I AM.

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:25:00 PM
    Heavenly write! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 5:46:00 PM
    That's a beautiful vision man, so much said that leads the mind to beauty, in such a way...great words. Read ;{>

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 11:14:00 AM
    thanks for being part of my gig, pace.. huggs!..:)

  1. Date: 9/9/2013 7:04:00 AM
    This was heavenly. So uplifting and beautiful! Like a breath of fresh air.