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'our First Day'

You left it with me your heart that is - Do you want it back? I somehow have the ability to look after it pretty well even though it’s not mine to keep do you remember that first day you smiled - I smiled back remember how you said, my eyes convey a message of their own? I wonder what you would say if you see them now? Would you still read the same message like our first day?
*an old one I came across tonight, made me smile* ©050820121945

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/11/2012 4:59:00 PM
i guess i am not the onoly one who goes through old poems. do you rewrite them or just copy them the way they are?
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Date: 8/10/2012 6:59:00 PM
It's an oldie but a goody...made me smile too...fourth line is a gem!...I got my 'Wilma' fix for tonight so I shall sleep well (I'm addicted you know) - Tim
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Date: 8/6/2012 9:10:00 AM
yes, I smiled too, Wilma - lovely write, my friend lfde
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Date: 8/6/2012 1:33:00 AM
smiling back at ya with a nod of poetic pleasantry, wilms.. wonderful!.:) huggs!
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:59:00 PM
It is soooo cute Wilma....old memories (?) :) - Thank you for visit and comments my poem. - Have a lovely NEW week Wilma. - oxox love // Anne-Lise
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:46:00 PM
Wilma old one or not, I like this sultry, sexy write...David
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Date: 8/5/2012 12:32:00 PM
I can see how this poem would make you smile Wilma, it brought a smile to my face today! I really enjoyed the awesomeness of this write my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 8/5/2012 11:56:00 AM
Any lucky heart that gets the chance to be in your sweet hands of care is a blessed for the time it is there.. my opinion but then again I have a crush on you.lol...oxxo Michael
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