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Our Father My Savior

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Our Father My Savior

Let's paint the skies with rainbows,

to keep away the sad.

The world used to be wonderful,

but is slowly turning bad.

So we need to step so carefully,

 like walking on breaking ice.

Be nice to our friends and neighbors,

and consider everything twice.

God is looking down on his many children,

and being silent to what we have to say.

We can't get angry or deceitful,

just love, rejoice him and pray.

He will return and lead us to those wonderful pearly gates,

and as we stand before him and confess our every sin,

many of us will wonder "will he even let me in?"

We know our God is forgiving,

and that he loves us so very much,

he will understand if you have stumbled a couple times,

or fallen out of touch.

Just remember our Father loves us no matter what we do.

But only those who praise and rejoice him,

will be allowed to be passing through.

 

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  1. Date: 9/1/2012 11:05:00 AM
    nice write