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Our Eyes

Our eyes My child hood is slipping away from me my memories fading in light of new. Parts of me still lost in loam searching for your face in fading grey. All I have left of you is me. All I have left of your words are imprinted in my soul so that when despair at our seperation becomes to great I can hold, caress, and run them through my mind like the silk of the blanket you wrapped me in and put around my shoulders to look in the water and find your eyes and see you in mine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/26/2011 10:14:00 PM
smile!? -- another melancholy muse my dear brushed in the brilliance of ones Soulful depthful hues although once more, there seems to be such a temporal view amid your visions I would somewhat believe given these glimpses through your beauties written verse -- hopefully your precious heart shall find the rainbow of brighter promise at the end of this mirages moment of time -- love, Always, christopher ~
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Date: 2/26/2011 8:00:00 PM
Awweee... so powerful and loving at the same time~ God gave you a gift...keep writing! Great job...
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