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Our Daily Path

Pebbles, rocks and boulders Obstacles in our way Over, around and upward The measure of our day.. Puddles, streams and rivers Bar the way ahead Step, wade or swim Find another path instead... Cracks, ditches and canyons Roadblocks to dismay Busy building bridges Until we're old and gray... Twisting, turning byways To keep us on our toes Eyes to the horizon How a man's life goes...

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  1. Date: 8/20/2013 7:25:00 PM
    A very nice poem reminding us of the reality of old age. Nice symbols and imagery displayed in this piece.

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 9:53:00 AM
    this simple poem has so much wisdom! you've pretty much summed up life here and i enjoyed it very much!

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 3:46:00 AM
    Great poetic quality..Great truth contained in those lines..Enjoyed reading this one today..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 8/20/2013 2:06:00 AM
    Beautifully crafted...enjoyed it. Love, alway...Michael

  1. Date: 8/19/2013 10:58:00 PM
    Perfect! I couldn't have said it better myself. I could have writen it but you beat me to it. My highest compliment a fav.