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OUCH

Diving in head first
Love crushes me instantly
OUCH! When will I learn?

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  1. Date: 5/15/2011 11:32:00 AM
    you know when i was a teenager i fell in love so fast and easy, i was always getting hurt, saying no more, when will i learn, so i can relate to this fine piece you wrote. thank you for commenting on I wish i was a cloud.

  1. Date: 5/13/2011 11:43:00 PM
    Very cute!

  1. Date: 5/10/2011 7:26:00 AM
    short and sweet what a treat!

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 2:54:00 PM
    R.M.lol.. i can't help but laugh... because... ain't that the truth.. when will we learn... ouch.. to it all... i think since we dive head first... we forget when its over... lol... take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 8:29:00 AM
    Cool and creative pice R.M. and diving into anything head first willl cause an OUCh luv.. especially luv.. it is a learning process .. delightful read..thankxx for your sweet critique on my poetry too...

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 7:54:00 AM
    good one

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 7:36:00 AM
    I enjoyed the humor and wit with deep meaning, R.M.

  1. Date: 5/7/2011 7:01:00 AM
    That's the trouble...most of us never learn! Love has such a hold on us. Good little write.