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Origami Spirit

Origami spirit - fragile layers under paper thin skin fares cuts. The heart's depths protected on smooth edges. Hands with scissors claim destruction. Yet mine enemies fall from true beauty held in creation, perfection of folds, the triumph of form. Origami - shielded by hands, the maker of all that's sacred. I am one - life, spirit, crane soaring ancient folds of breath. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders, June 10, 2012 For True Diminishing Hexaverse contest (David Williams)

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  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:51:00 PM
    how you scribed this is amazing,rhonda... congrats and huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:43:00 AM
    A wonderful blending of east & west with soaring imagery, for me it should have been higher than mine! [which was frivelous yours is deep!] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:02:00 AM
    Nice and wonderful piece,Rhonda...Celestial picture painted. great job..Congrats on your well deserved win...

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:25:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:18:00 PM
    Wonderful poem, Rhonda, love it and congrats on the win, :) Jag

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:44:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Rhonda another excellent write xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:32:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:38:00 AM
    RHONDA~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,pd

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:12:00 AM
    Rhonda nice smooth flow to these lines, thanks for entering and well done...David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:03:00 AM
    I thought for sure this would land in the top three. it's THAT good, sweetie. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 7:01:00 AM
    Excellent work Rhonda!Enjoyed.

  1. Date: 6/15/2012 3:19:00 PM
    touching look at origami. Some say each work holds a piece of it's maker's soul. Origami certainly is very tactile, as is your poem.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 12:46:00 PM
    love this clever piece, Rhonda. Many congrats on your wins : )

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 11:04:00 AM
    Rhonda, someone mentioned to me that I was copying your entry idea, and I had no idea wot they were going on about. Hmmm, I also used origami as a theme, but your diminished hexaverse is so much more poetic than my entry. This is a fantastic poem. You're simply getting better and better as a poet-ess all the time.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 10:23:00 PM
    oh my gosh, what a splendid way to do this form. Such symbolism. This is really really nice. One of the best I've seen for this contest. No luck needed for you, missy.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:21:00 PM
    Perfect!! And opens like a flower from birth till bloom.

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:44:00 AM
    Very well written and perfect for the contest have a win poem here! - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/10/2012 9:35:00 PM