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open sesame

cross from 
the darkside
release me 
from these chains
my saviour 
i found you

open the lock
with your 
magical key
on leaving 
the lock
the key 
a beautiful butterfly

flying to you love
swallowed by 
the frog
who hopped
 into the pond
sitting on 
a lilly leaf
eyes closed dreaming

my key 
it found you
deep down
 in your throat
 for your heart

have i found you
only then 
will i give you
my soul
it is then
you found
the key of  
my heart

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  1. Date: 10/4/2013 9:02:00 PM
    Well done my Irish friend! Cheers from Canada!

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 3:57:00 PM
    This is beautiful. Great write! Love, Juli-Michelle

  1. Date: 10/4/2013 1:16:00 PM
    - A lovely poem Liam, give the key to the one you love most of all!! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)