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only when I'm with you

       only when I'm with you  

You ask me how much i love you
I tell you more than you will ever know.
we're laying there under the sunset
thinking about our lives together.
we look up at the sky ,and we say aw what perfect weather.

I'm laying in your arms 
as you are holding me tight
you rub your fingers through my hair
I smell the strong sweet smells from you,
in the earth atmosphere.
As i hold on to you tight

I tell you that i love you looking straight in your eyes.
i feel at peace with you
your like my protection
when I'm not with you, each day is like a contraction. 
each day i learn something new about you
i guess what I'm saying is I love you boo.

Copyright © Darshae carley

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  1. Date: 9/15/2010 7:46:00 PM
    Dear Darshae, This is very well written, One can feel YOUR Heartbeat Faster and Faster in each stanza. YOU Write from the Heart and I Like that, Thank-YOU for YOUR Thank-YOU Comment on my POEM "Latika" I do have a Question I wrote that on 12/07/08 Were YOU on POETRYSOUP before with the name Latika just Curious ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG

  1. Date: 3/6/2010 12:35:00 PM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Darshae. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/5/2010 4:18:00 PM
    Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets...please continue to share your creative writes with us this delight tonight... luv is a lovely subject to write about as a theme..enjoyed..luv.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..Linda-Marie