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One With the Night

Silver mist halo radiates its primal pull Calling to your ancient soul Fear and awe combine enthralling you with its spell You become one with the night Paula Swanson 10/29/10 For the contest; What Happens During A Full Moon Sponsored by Russell Sivey Placement: 1st

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/2/2011 12:18:00 PM

There really does seem to be some inexplicable attration to the sight of a full moon. Love the way you describe becoming "one with the night," Paula. This is the way I feel when I spend nights at sea. Beautiful imagery. Super congrats on your first place in Russell's contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/2/2011 9:47:00 AM

Congrats Paula on first place win with this visual delight poetry my friend..luv..

James Marshall Goff

Date: 11/2/2011 8:20:00 AM

congrats Paula! yes the "halo" is amazing! you nailed it! jimbo

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/2/2011 5:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Russell's "What Happens During A Full Moon" contest Paula. Love, Carol

Margaret Foster

Date: 11/2/2011 12:08:00 AM

Gazing up at a big full moon on dark night. A great title Paula, fits the verse perfectly.Congratulations...Margaret

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/1/2011 10:14:00 PM

Congratulations on your 1st place win in my contest, "what happens during a full moon."