One Way To Say It

There’s one way that you seek help A file that’s true, would find great news Brought to face me in front of some glass I love their great light brought in for some hues There’s no man that brought such glee Just the Lord is what can bring it Worked on life to be a whole man here The word is truth; to be set free is writ I feel the word work on me I will be there in our heart’s deal And to the whole world that’s there with me I’m a king of my own self, it’s so real So to look at the way here To bring help to your cold blank eyes The glass brings false hope to my sweet life To see the hurt that can be viewed as lies
Entrant into David Williams' "One to One" contest 1/8/2013 Verse 7/8/9/10 syllables
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Date: 1/31/2013 4:22:00 PM
Russell a great powerful write of One On One. A well deserve win. Warm Smiles Connie
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Date: 1/30/2013 9:28:00 PM
Russell, a very nice win in David's "one to one" contest~ :-) PD
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Date: 1/28/2013 7:01:00 AM
Wow, this is a gorgeous write, Russell! Congrats! :)
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Date: 1/27/2013 10:49:00 PM
With your words l visualize a man imprisoned, if not in body, then by mind and his faith in the Lord freeing him. Excellent write with this winning entry Russell! A big congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/27/2013 3:42:00 PM
Another winning poem, congrats!
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Date: 1/27/2013 12:58:00 PM
Beautiful poetry in simple one word verses. Great job!!
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Date: 1/27/2013 12:27:00 PM
Great write Russel, great one , enjoyed....thanks for sharing...... Mehnaz
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Date: 1/27/2013 12:07:00 PM
Russell congratulations on your placement, a very good well crafted piece of work with a fine message...David
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Date: 1/10/2013 1:41:00 AM
yes Russell words to tell a story mate, let it flow dont hesitate... as well you know! good one mate....
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Date: 1/9/2013 3:34:00 PM
Interesting work..Winning material for sure..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..I hope that the Word has filled your soul..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 1/9/2013 1:56:00 PM
I second costance, well done Russell. Thank you for an excellent contest and for helping me learn a new form.
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Date: 1/9/2013 12:42:00 PM
Russell, well done for a difficult contest, best of luck and thanks so much for my placement in your Natual Dodoitsu contest, I am very honoured. Constance
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Date: 1/9/2013 12:11:00 PM
This is verty, verry good. There is only one way to say it. I just know that you'll be a winner in the contest. Thanks for sharing and Part III of ( A Man Stood ) is posted already. I hope you enjoy it. Lucilla
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Date: 1/9/2013 1:40:00 AM
Great poem!
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Date: 1/8/2013 10:37:00 PM
Wow, outstanding write my friend, really enjoyed how it read, good luck in the contest. Rollo
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