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One was two

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Am truly sitting in a hotel lounge, wishing I was with someone special.  My friends are all couples, hmmm.  Never mind . One day. 

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One was two

Away for the weekend
With friends, for a chance
To relax, recover,
Maybe to dance.

Sitting in the hotel lounge
Observing all I could
Saw a couple obviously not married
Trying to act as they should.

Felt like saying, go on hold hands
Look into each others eyes
Whisper sweet nothings
But tell no lies.

Wish i had a someone
To be close too
Wouldn't care a damn
Well, would you?

Instead will go sightseeing
Some retail therapy too
Drinks in the evening
Still wishing one was two.


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  1. Date: 2/17/2013 2:59:00 PM
    I'm still reading, still observing, here in the shadows at times. I also know this all too well. I am starting to see your diversity. You enter many contest, maybe to try new forms, maybe to show support, but you are versatile in your writing. Nice poem.

    Date: 2/17/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes I enter contests mainly to try different forms, and out of politeness to the person who has organised it.
  1. Date: 10/19/2012 6:54:00 PM
    I really enjoyed reading this Seren. Wonderfully done.

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 3:16:00 PM
    Ohhh!!There is that special person out there just for you..Enjoyed reading this afternoon...Sara

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 2:16:00 PM
    Beautiful pensive and yearning emotions penned, hope there will soon be two for you, hugs vie

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 11:18:00 AM
    A sweet and romantic "dream" weekend. - A very well written poem, a little sad ... Hope your weekend will be super good!! oxox love Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 10/19/2012 10:14:00 AM
    I understand this all too well. "Whisper sweet nothings, but tell no lies": A vital line. Nice job!