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The eye is said to be the window to the soul..

One Tear Rolled

One
Tear rolled
From curved corner
Of sadden eye
Light reflected grief
From well-darkened iris
Heavy lashes cast shadows
'Pon gloomy deepened pondering
Pupil that opens window of soul
Pain, agony,bleeding, crushed, marred, hurt heart

Sponsor: Linda-Marie
Contest:Poetic Art
Written by: Sara Kendrick

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2012

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Maria Maria Date: 4/15/2012 6:33:00 AM I like the mesage of your poem, describing the road of tears which comes from the bottom of the heart "window of soul", it's very emotional. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/16/2012 12:25:00 AM You chose a very interesting way to go, describing that one solitary tear drop and all the grief it contained. Very nice, Sara! Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 2/13/2012 1:48:00 PM Wow, powerful and sad write, my friend Login to Reply

Jslambert Mister Roboto Date: 2/12/2012 9:17:00 PM Vivid. I personally enjoyed the imagery. To cry is one thing...to be able to describe the tears so well...well, that was up to you. I must say...Impressive!~ Login to Reply

Tim B Date: 2/12/2012 4:31:00 PM Beautiful, I love how the poem seemed to flow as if it was a flood of tears. Definitely poetic art and powerfully emotional, quite painful. Good luck Mrs. Sara. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 2/12/2012 10:28:00 AM thankxx for supporting my contest Sara with this glorious write.. good luck luv.. Login to Reply

James Marshall Goff Date: 2/11/2012 5:12:00 PM beautifully crafted! Sara! jimbo Login to Reply

Laila Andresen Mjelde Date: 2/11/2012 4:23:00 PM This was a great poem you have painted here, Sara, I like your style! oxoxo love Laila Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 2/11/2012 3:51:00 PM bleeding yet beautiful in form and content, sara... a winner for me!..:) hugggs! Login to Reply

Lizanne Scholtz Date: 2/11/2012 3:50:00 PM A very vivid picture of sadness you have painted sara, good luck in the contest, love Elizabeth Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/11/2012 3:48:00 PM I love this etheree, Sara. You have painted such a picture, I feel the sadness! Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Don Johnson Date: 2/11/2012 3:40:00 PM sadness is a state of mind, when all is gone, no love to bind, well done babe .... Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 2/11/2012 3:32:00 PM Wow, what a poem this one is! I really enjoyed this write that I read this afternoon! My favorite line has to be, "...Heavy lashes cast shadows..." it brings about a little of an eerie feel! What a wonderful line it is! This is an outstanding poem Sara! Incredible Work!! Login to Reply