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One Tear Rolled

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The eye is said to be the window to the soul..

One Tear rolled From curved corner Of sadden eye Light reflected grief From well-darkened iris Heavy lashes cast shadows 'Pon gloomy deepened pondering Pupil that opens window of soul Pain, agony,bleeding, crushed, marred, hurt heart Sponsor: Linda-Marie Contest:Poetic Art Written by: Sara Kendrick

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Maria Maria

Date: 4/15/2012 6:33:00 AM

I like the mesage of your poem, describing the road of tears which comes from the bottom of the heart "window of soul", it's very emotional.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2012 12:25:00 AM

You chose a very interesting way to go, describing that one solitary tear drop and all the grief it contained. Very nice, Sara!

Jack Horne

Date: 2/13/2012 1:48:00 PM

Wow, powerful and sad write, my friend

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 2/12/2012 9:17:00 PM

Vivid. I personally enjoyed the imagery. To cry is one thing...to be able to describe the tears so well...well, that was up to you. I must say...Impressive!~

Tim B

Date: 2/12/2012 4:31:00 PM

Beautiful, I love how the poem seemed to flow as if it was a flood of tears. Definitely poetic art and powerfully emotional, quite painful. Good luck Mrs. Sara.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/12/2012 10:28:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my contest Sara with this glorious write.. good luck luv..

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/11/2012 5:12:00 PM

beautifully crafted! Sara! jimbo

Laila Andresen Mjelde

Date: 2/11/2012 4:23:00 PM

This was a great poem you have painted here, Sara, I like your style! oxoxo love Laila

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/11/2012 3:51:00 PM

bleeding yet beautiful in form and content, sara... a winner for me!..:) hugggs!

Lizanne Scholtz

Date: 2/11/2012 3:50:00 PM

A very vivid picture of sadness you have painted sara, good luck in the contest, love Elizabeth

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/11/2012 3:48:00 PM

I love this etheree, Sara. You have painted such a picture, I feel the sadness! Blessings, Rhonda

Don Johnson

Date: 2/11/2012 3:40:00 PM

sadness is a state of mind, when all is gone, no love to bind, well done babe ....

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/11/2012 3:32:00 PM

Wow, what a poem this one is! I really enjoyed this write that I read this afternoon! My favorite line has to be, "...Heavy lashes cast shadows..." it brings about a little of an eerie feel! What a wonderful line it is! This is an outstanding poem Sara! Incredible Work!!