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One Spring Day

Winter withdraws its cloak from the hills Quietly revealing this spring's newborn green My tired heart with sweet anticipation fills The world seems somehow bright and clean And nature's hope and promise again convene
Spring quintain contest 2/6/12

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Date: 2/27/2012 5:52:00 PM
I love that first line - so descriptive. Congrats on your win, Barbara! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/27/2012 5:03:00 PM
You composed a great poem, dear Barbara ! Congratulations on your win. Let Spring come to you!!! :) Best, iolanda
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Date: 2/27/2012 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Francine's "English Quintain" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/26/2012 5:26:00 PM
Sweet anticipation of Spring. Congratulations on a fine piece Barbara. Love, Joyce.
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Date: 2/26/2012 3:39:00 PM
I just LOVE this one, Barbara. One of the shortest but also one of the sweetest on the list of winners. Congrats for your win. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2012 1:59:00 PM
congrats BG on a well deserved win for this beautiful write on Spring luv..
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Date: 2/25/2012 11:12:00 PM
congrats on your win in the contest Barbara
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Date: 2/8/2012 10:52:00 AM
I like your spring quintain Barbara,beautiful springtime!!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/7/2012 12:25:00 AM
Very nice poem on advent of spring.Enjoyed the read.
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