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One More Try

One more try At the beginning, I thought to myself, we will last we will end up together, But I see now, we are not perfect we are not soul mates, as I look at us I was day dreaming that we will pull through that we will make it work, but, we shattered like dropped mirrors, leaving me confused, searching for us. At the beginning your heart and mine they searched for each other, we wanted to make it last to last longer then a life time. Now I see we are not mean to be or, is it still a hope is there anything else left to explore to give it a try one more time Ivy

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Date: 5/3/2012 12:15:00 AM
so very true, always worth another try...
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Date: 4/10/2012 10:56:00 AM
i live in a land of one more tries. time heals all wounds and forgiving comes with forgetfullness. so it's al ways good to give it one more try.
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Date: 4/8/2012 6:18:00 PM
Two hearts that search for each other should always take one more try. Loved this.
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Date: 4/8/2012 5:38:00 PM
Luck in love to you...hope it goes well. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/8/2012 6:15:00 PM
lol ha ha ha this is sweetest comment I have ever get,thank you dear friend,Ivy

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