One More Peg

One more peg to quench my thirst, thirst of a desert nearer to sea so close to it yet so far. One more peg to forget the pain, pain of my heart which I once offered to you but you refused. One more peg to end this poem, a poem of love, love that is lost, lost in time never to come. Just one m o r e pe....... ===================== placement:10 th, (July 2011) Contest:Anything Goes Sponsor:Irma Linda Trevino By:kashinath karmakar(18th January,2011)
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Date: 8/9/2011 1:17:00 AM
Kash, that was my partner's line that you referred to. I think some Americans count twinkling as three syllables. I assume they are counting twink le ing. However, in the midewest and west, we just say it like twink ling.
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Date: 7/19/2011 1:55:00 PM
Now you must tell me...peg? You know there was an old song called Pegg a my Heart? Do you mean like she's putting a nail/peg in your heart? dreamily romantic...Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 7/19/2011 11:35:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
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Date: 7/19/2011 10:11:00 AM
Kash, I just love the ending.. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 7/19/2011 8:30:00 AM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of P.d., kaSHINATH
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest "Anything Goes" Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/19/2011 4:46:00 AM
Congrats Kash on a spectacular win for splendid poetry my friend..sorry for late congrats but system was not cooperating late last night and got frustrated waiting for validate key to work..but TPS is adapting new system shortly..yeah..luv..
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:39:00 AM
the way you ended this sure reinforced your poem pretty well, Kashinath! Enjoyed this and of how you let the thoughts flow-- the second line's last word leading to the first word of the third line--very cool-- keep on adding more pe..... ;)
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:17:00 AM
whooa... an endless ream of flourishing thoughts, kashinath.. i heart this!! :)hugggs, nette
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Date: 1/19/2011 9:46:00 PM
Kashinath, this is a beautiful write from you. WAs it for a contest? I saved you for last tonight and then I'm outta here to go make late cookies in my kitchen. Let me answer that soupmail and see what else I was gonna look at!
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:39:00 PM
I agree a fav. of mine too.... such great poetry from you...thank you for sharing...always Michael
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Date: 1/19/2011 1:10:00 PM
How I love the way you ended this poem, Kashinath. There is always another peg, another river to cross, another mountain to come. It seems we never completely reach our destinations. Excellent poem for my favorites. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2011 6:13:00 AM
Deep and emotional lines Kashinath .. romance brings this out in a poet.. u have penned so beautifully my friend.. the inner feelings of your heart and soul..with luv..
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Date: 1/19/2011 2:53:00 AM
You have made quite a nice use of oxymorons in this write, kashinath. short and sweet expressions
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