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One More Mile

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One More Mile

My daughter desires To walk a mile in her shoes Before illness takes

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  1. Date: 4/22/2010 2:51:00 PM
    Im very busy lately James,Im glad Im reading you today..Congrat..a well deserved win..awesome..Charma

  1. Date: 4/22/2010 12:52:00 PM
    congratulations James,well deserved...Allie

  1. Date: 4/21/2010 12:54:00 PM
    great write!! I stand amazed!!

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 1:28:00 PM
    James~ Congratulations on your first place win! Very heart rattling! Laura :)

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 8:12:00 AM
    James, It is certainly no surpise to find you listed in the #1 spot again. This poem is so emtionally stirring. I am honored in disbelief to have my 15 minutes, brushing shoulders with the likes of you! From your friends' comments below, I've gathered your daughter's health status may uncertain. My prayers are with you and your family.

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 4:56:00 AM
    Congrats James on your 1st place win in Still Life contest.. very touching words..luv.. "Sweetheart"

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 4:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your first place win in Raul's Still Life contest James. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 4:32:00 AM
    way to go! James! great work! jimbo

  1. Date: 4/20/2010 12:11:00 AM
    What a heartfelt Senryu, dear James. Congratulations for your first place. Celebrate!!!

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 1:40:00 PM
    Wonderful day James..! Congrats on your 1st place.. BG

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 1:17:00 PM
    congrats on your win very nice faleshia

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 12:54:00 PM
    Congratulations on your success with this emotional Senryu. Was this written from a fictional perspective? I sure hope so....Chris.

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 12:44:00 PM
    oh, my goodness, I just saw the winners!! And you are at the top. wow, congratulations! andrea

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 12:36:00 PM
    Good entry, James! LUv, andrea

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 12:32:00 PM
    James, congratulations on winning my contest...Raul

  1. Date: 4/19/2010 10:02:00 AM
    sad sad Jamie...Big hug and prayers! light & Love

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 2:06:00 PM
    James, please let me know how your daughter is. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 12:05:00 PM
    This is seriously heartwrenching (and awesome). In view of the wear in those shoes, "My daughter" will accomplish her goal. Thank you for your positive outlook and encouragement to others.

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 11:26:00 AM
    James..please let us know if your daughter is ill..Im worried for you..your friend BG..i do like the interpretation of the pic. BG

  1. Date: 4/18/2010 6:51:00 AM
    Oh man, James...The last line tells me at that very least that your daughter has become ill? (afraid I'm assuming the worst here) Would appreciate a soup mail or comment telling me if I have misinterpreted - Tim

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