One Mind To Free Them All

Everything about us is thought to be shared
in some higher state of united being
that understands why we were always scared.

Every minute detail
of every minute of our lives
was always thought from the same mind.

So truly there is no purpose in hiding
when there's just no place to hide
from a Presence that can only heal.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/12/2009 5:30:00 PM
Man I love the understanding you have in that last line of your poem. There is nowhere to run and hid from God, which is the love that will and can heal your mind, which is 99.99 % of Life's problem. You also nailed it in your understanding in your comment on my poem " A Sacred Voice Of Choice ", you and I can get along"man" God bless Moses
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Date: 7/8/2009 12:52:00 PM
the wisdom of accepting yourself....
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Date: 6/30/2009 4:19:00 AM
hI Yoni,recomment:in my poem i used The Sun Flower as a metaphor--the young lady who lives by the sun...yet you asked me a question and this is what i think...i think the sunflower doesnt have a mind ,a soul but somehow it brings me peace to look at it,and through it and all the beauty of nature i can see Love by our creator,so final answer-the sun flower has a heart,my sun flower at least ;-)--charma now to your poem--cont...
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Date: 6/28/2009 3:21:00 PM
We cannot hide from ourselves, even though we may try when we're scared. And I do believe their are "higher states" in which we understand many of the things that confound or frighten us when we get caught up in the day-to-day rut. Perhaps it is a worthy goal to reach this enlightened state and try to stay there. Excellent, thought-provoking write, Yoni! You always get me thinking. Thanks! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/28/2009 2:39:00 PM
i love the clever way you've presented this poem,love the format,i like your style--one for all and all for one--one mind---great mind my friend --charma
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Date: 6/27/2009 9:06:00 PM
The trajectory of your truth stalks the blinding eye ... this poem is like a vision that prophesy. One love
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