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One Little Thump

One Little Thump
(Ottava-Rima )

Lord can you please give them a little thump
They only need a reality check
It does not have to be a major bump
I'm only asking for a little peck
You certainly don't have to leave a bump
Just enough to cause them to be a wreck
They maybe they can see how others feel
We have feelings also and they are real

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  1. Date: 8/26/2012 8:29:00 PM
    MARY, congratulations with your featured poem of the week. :-) Always~PD

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 4:12:00 PM
    Hope you enjoy your stay at poetry soup, enjoyed reading your work tonight V

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 10:28:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Mary. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 9:13:00 PM
    I love this poem Welcome to the soup

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 7:29:00 PM
    welcome to the soup my freind nice point here thank you

  1. Date: 11/18/2010 3:00:00 PM
    Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on Soup will be special and fun.. any help needed just ask any one.. check out the contest page offered to members.. good luck with luv..