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One Last Wish

Each day he wakes and takes a breath, Wishing it would be his last. All he does is pray for death; To be forgotten, like the past. His greatest dream: to live no more; To leave this infernal place. For his body to wash ashore Where no one even knows his face. Call it sinful, call it proud, Call it whatever you'd like, But when this Sun is blocked by clouds No joy can ever strike.

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  1. Date: 3/11/2012 1:06:00 AM
    wow, I LOVE how you did this free verse poem. VERY nice writing, Danny.

  1. Date: 2/24/2012 3:56:00 AM
    Very deep most touching poem... Hope the clouds pass by so quick..Charma

  1. Date: 1/23/2012 4:15:00 AM
    Reading some of yours poem to day Danny,I like yours poem alot.- :) - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 1/17/2012 11:41:00 PM
    This is one of your better submissions. You have written this with clear descriptiveness and appropriate rhyming.

  1. Date: 1/10/2012 7:19:00 PM
    Sometimes in the shadows we can discover a dormant sun waiting to explode, enjoyed your poem and your smile Danny, write more gems as this, hugs,vie