One Bright Leaf

Wind sings a dirge where rust leaves have fallen. In the autumn of her life one bright leaf has risen I stand on the hill we tumbled down as children brimming with spirit no longer with me is she whose remains I am holding released to the wind her ashes now are mingling with the fallen leaves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 7/9/2013 5:49:00 PM
Late congratulations on this one. When my step dad passed away my mom took his ashes everywhere with her an sprinkles a bit of his ashes at various locations. Ther was something very sweet in her actions. This poem is very touching.
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:13:00 PM
A GOOD WINNING VERSE ................ GOODNIGHT *SKAT
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:27:00 AM
Beautifully done, my sweet. You are always right on when you describe the contents of a loving heart.... Hugs.... Jake
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Date: 6/30/2013 5:16:00 PM
I knew, too...Congratulations, lovely lady. SuZ
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Date: 6/28/2013 4:15:00 PM
Wonderful and lovely piece of poetry,Andrea...Good write,nice presentation...Congrats on your superb win in this contest...Kudos to you,dear friend....
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Date: 6/28/2013 5:56:00 AM
great! it has crossed all barriers great! excellent write. My wishes for a great win. No.1. excellent!
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Date: 6/27/2013 9:06:00 PM
This lovely poem surely deserve to win. Conratz, Andrea..! :)
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:34:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:23:00 PM
I remember this poem and I knew it had to be a winner. congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:12:00 PM
Wow! Great poetry there. Congrats on ur superb win.
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Date: 6/27/2013 7:05:00 PM
You nailed it NICE win. Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 6/27/2013 6:44:00 PM
Is this a true story? In any case, it is beautiful and deserving o your big win. BG
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Date: 6/27/2013 12:44:00 PM
I hope you haven't lost someone dear. This is lovely. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/27/2013 12:34:00 PM
Andrea, your poem is breathlessly beautiful, I loved it so congratulations on first place in my Three Verses Contest, Constance
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Date: 6/23/2013 1:25:00 AM
So beautiful, Andrea...great write. :)
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Date: 6/17/2013 9:06:00 AM
That last leaf, shivering on a limb, has always fascinated me. I like the mystery you infuse in your poem. Love, daver
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Date: 6/17/2013 4:03:00 AM
Ow gee how sad the feeling of loosing someome We love but how beautiful past memoriesl never forgotten.
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Date: 6/15/2013 2:10:00 PM
wow this is amazing poetry Andrea,, very touching indeed..
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Date: 6/15/2013 12:46:00 PM
Hi Andrea: Very touching words. So sorry for you loss. SuZ
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Date: 6/15/2013 11:39:00 AM
such a sad but lovely write, my friend
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Date: 6/15/2013 8:16:00 AM
Sad yet beautiful!
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Date: 6/15/2013 6:36:00 AM
Beautiful! Touches the heart with a tender caress.
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Date: 6/14/2013 6:36:00 PM
A fine tribute you have written Andrea. The image conveyed is sad but beautiful. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/14/2013 12:05:00 PM
Andrea, this is such a beautiful write, especially love the ending. I hope your weeekend will be a relaxing one ;) love Wilma
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Date: 6/14/2013 5:42:00 AM
A very sad but a very beautiful poem my dear friend Andrea! I love it so much. Thanks a lot for sharing. Have a great day! love and big hugs, Leonora
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