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Once upon a memory

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Once upon a memory

The sun has risen in my night but I was blind to see the light The moon have sunk in a new dawn I dreamt too long,and it was gone.... Now i stroll over the shore gazing above the horizon to find a shooting star But what's the use of shooting stars which fade too far from where you are? What's the use to make a wish when you are not with me What's the use of sprinkling spells on once upon a memory? What's the use for candles on the sand If you're not here to hold my hand What's the use of fragrant words when autumn leaves are burnt What's the use for hearts to beat when worlds don't understand? Last petal falls upon my feet the wind blows in my hair a melody on starry night Hushed whisper in my ear Soft music plays in distance the guitar 's not there So what's the use for symphony? Once more I'm deaf to hear Slowly i tiptoe to the stone wall which stands behind the old Palm tree Slowly I seek deeper as a tiny shadow i see a shadow which keeps growing and getting close to me Its my imagination It must be a fantasy In silence I walk back to where our cabin used to be My fingers bury footprints which I found by the sea.
Charma This is a fiction poem inspired by a song i was hearing called 'Love is blind' by Donny Montell

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  1. Date: 1/29/2013 10:53:00 AM
    Sweet and sad; a real journey through the emotions. I.R. You really are a wit. Here I thought you would hope that Valentienes fever was catching, and you say you don't. And then there was that hillariously funny word that I can't pronounce well, let alone spell. I think you may be too far gone for a cure.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 9:28:00 AM
    Poetic and a beautiful poem here Charma !!! Very well written . Anne

  1. Date: 6/11/2012 2:49:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 4:11:00 PM
    This has got to go on my favs, Charma. Heartbreaking and elegant...I'm gonna look up Donny Montell on Spotify too...gotta hear that song! As always, thank you for your kind comments and support...have a wonderful evening - Tim

  1. Date: 6/7/2012 8:02:00 AM
    beautiful work CC...TAH

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 5:48:00 PM
    A beautifully flowing write dear poet, it truly makes the heart want to sing ! Great write my friend ! Have a wonderful night my friend....much love, james

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 2:11:00 PM
    Such a lovely poem with that touch of sadness that reaches out to me. You created a beauty! :)

  1. Date: 5/31/2012 12:24:00 PM
    Charma, there is only one word to say abot this poem: BEAUTIFUL ! - Thank you D.Montell that inspired Charma into this unique poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 5/30/2012 11:56:00 PM
    Im reading again this beauty! I can't help!

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 10:04:00 PM
    Is It? : ) Stunning beauty has inspired you this song, Charmaine."Love is blind"??? I have to google Donni Montell... Have a wonderful morning. Ruben.

  1. Date: 5/29/2012 11:02:00 AM
    I am not familiar with this song but this just flowed So beautifully for me, Charma! I love how you ask your questions here and just ponder-- it was also almost like I was there...beautiful yet also sad thoughts! thanks for passing by my poem and it heartened me to know that you remembered that poem of mine :) thanks for the fave sweetie and I wish you a wonderful week! Hugs to you!!

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:10:00 PM
    Hi Charma! A masterpiece you`ve posted here my dear friend.Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 1:55:00 AM
    HI, charma, and thanks as always for posting a romantic lyrical poem here at Soup!! Like your name, your poetry is so charming. You have to soupmail me and tell me how it's going for you. Any BIG news yet? Luv, Andrea