Once Upon a Memory

The sun has risen in my night but I was blind to see the light The moon have sunk in a new dawn I dreamt too long,and it was gone.... Now i stroll over the shore gazing above the horizon to find a shooting star But what's the use of shooting stars which fade too far from where you are? What's the use to make a wish when you are not with me What's the use of sprinkling spells on once upon a memory? What's the use for candles on the sand If you're not here to hold my hand What's the use of fragrant words when autumn leaves are burnt What's the use for hearts to beat when worlds don't understand? Last petal falls upon my feet the wind blows in my hair a melody on starry night Hushed whisper in my ear Soft music plays in distance the guitar 's not there So what's the use for symphony? Once more I'm deaf to hear Slowly i tiptoe to the stone wall which stands behind the old Palm tree Slowly I seek deeper as a tiny shadow i see a shadow which keeps growing and getting close to me Its my imagination It must be a fantasy In silence I walk back to where our cabin used to be My fingers bury footprints which I found by the sea.
Charma This is a fiction poem inspired by a song i was hearing called 'Love is blind' by Donny Montell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/2/2017 6:21:00 AM
A beautiful poem that carries a melancholy tone. I can picture myself in the scene. Would things be different if I paid a little more attention, showed a little more compassion, bathed her in my love. I hear the music in the distance and don't know what to do. Thanks for this beautiful poem and your friendship. Timo
Login to Reply
Date: 1/29/2013 10:53:00 AM
Sweet and sad; a real journey through the emotions. I.R. You really are a wit. Here I thought you would hope that Valentienes fever was catching, and you say you don't. And then there was that hillariously funny word that I can't pronounce well, let alone spell. I think you may be too far gone for a cure.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/16/2012 9:28:00 AM
Poetic and a beautiful poem here Charma !!! Very well written . Anne
Login to Reply
Date: 6/11/2012 2:49:00 AM
wonderful!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/7/2012 4:11:00 PM
This has got to go on my favs, Charma. Heartbreaking and elegant...I'm gonna look up Donny Montell on Spotify too...gotta hear that song! As always, thank you for your kind comments and support...have a wonderful evening - Tim
Login to Reply
Date: 6/7/2012 8:02:00 AM
beautiful work CC...TAH
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2012 5:48:00 PM
A beautifully flowing write dear poet, it truly makes the heart want to sing ! Great write my friend ! Have a wonderful night my friend....much love, james
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2012 2:11:00 PM
Such a lovely poem with that touch of sadness that reaches out to me. You created a beauty! :)
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2012 12:24:00 PM
Charma, there is only one word to say abot this poem: BEAUTIFUL ! - Thank you D.Montell that inspired Charma into this unique poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Login to Reply
Date: 5/29/2012 11:02:00 AM
I am not familiar with this song but this just flowed So beautifully for me, Charma! I love how you ask your questions here and just ponder-- it was also almost like I was there...beautiful yet also sad thoughts! thanks for passing by my poem and it heartened me to know that you remembered that poem of mine :) thanks for the fave sweetie and I wish you a wonderful week! Hugs to you!!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2012 1:55:00 AM
HI, charma, and thanks as always for posting a romantic lyrical poem here at Soup!! Like your name, your poetry is so charming. You have to soupmail me and tell me how it's going for you. Any BIG news yet? Luv, Andrea
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad