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Once Upon a Cloud

The duck swam fast to beat the crowd
Behind him a rabbit played with a wheel
To my dismay a lady cowed
The duck then eat her for his meal
And then I watched as a giraffe did kneel

A dragon roared past, its like a dream
A dog held up his paws in prayer
A bull raged through the crowd it seems
But none did move, none seemed to scare
Cloud stories are magical, this I do swear. 
© 15/08/2013 GG
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  1. Date: 8/31/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Good morning the win...Linda

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:58:00 PM
    clouds stories indeed Mandy Congrats to you on your win. Morgan

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 12:02:00 PM
    I enjoy letting my imagination run wild with those puffy fluffy clouds also..Congrats on your win with this very delightful work..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 9:06:00 AM
    Someone else sees the clouds the same as I do !!! You are the only other one who wrote with the whims of a child........I love it!!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 8:13:00 AM
    Fantastic! I love how you did this one. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 8/27/2013 6:44:00 AM
    congrats on a fine win Mandy

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:31:00 PM
    a good win... ~Love ~~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 8:31:00 PM
    This made me smile and smile. congrats on your in in my contest. BG

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 11:48:00 PM
    wow!! I like this magical stories of yours friend's lovely..good luck for the contest..hugs, maria

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 7:21:00 AM
    very nice Mandy gl with it Shadow x smiles

  1. Date: 8/16/2013 3:37:00 AM
    just love this Mandy, really do, i too love the clouds, and written about them often with the same mind set as you have..of course some folks thought i was on something, but never mind the image they can create as they float around in all shapes and sizes,, certainly have come across here, in this poem....