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Once Upon a Car Ride

Feel like that woman Screaming, he betrays They're stealing her They're taking her And everything shes kept safe He Can't protect her Not strong enough Not brave enough Nor man enough To understand her horror And how she will remember The rest of her life

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/21/2020 9:17:00 PM
Hi Juli, hope you are still with us here on soup..Just rambling through my favourites poems list,,came across this powerful gem from 2012..Keep safe...Harry.
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Date: 10/26/2012 2:55:00 PM
wow Juli, this is powerful, deeply emotional, and needed to be written. remember for all the wrong reasons... the fact that she is the victim, is soon forgotten, in this weird world.. this is the first poem i've read of you. and to my fav you go..
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Date: 10/26/2012 5:53:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Juli-. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
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