Once More

As the evening crept in
whisper of pines unfolded slowly another story,
every single instant seemed one decade;
unknown stars above blinking endlessly,
hand in hand ,our hearts unbridled themselves
and then escaped somewhere into darkness,
old moon unveiled the amazing mountains
every tree inundated by oozing silver;
under this autumn sky
enchanted by immense beauty
our speechless,unbounded moments
as four eyes met in love once more;
unabated passion about to explode moment
into fragments of pleasure
unlimited,boundless and never ending;
we inhaled fragrance of love
unfurling like a rose every second,
I thought of the universe for a moment
even though it seemed oblivion to us.

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For David's VOW/CON contest 

Contest Rules:1 original, poem on the theme of any theme 19 lines no more or less. 

your poem starts with a vowel then a consonant and keep all of your vowels in alphabetical order, so the pattern will be A con E con I con O con U con A con E con I con O con U and so-on until the last word ends in the vowel 'U' .

Please use more than two or three words per line...
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Date: 9/20/2013 9:51:00 PM
Hi Kash,, congrats on your winning poem *** Always & Forever ***LINDA
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Date: 9/20/2013 3:57:00 PM
congratulations..................SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2013 4:49:00 PM
It's so good to see this one finally getting the win it deserved. BIG congrats to you.
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Date: 9/16/2013 9:21:00 AM
This is such a beauty!! Not as easy as one would think.....wonderful !!
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Date: 9/15/2013 6:30:00 PM
great job. congrats.
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Date: 9/15/2013 6:28:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/15/2013 4:31:00 PM
congrats on your win Kash
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Date: 9/15/2013 12:29:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win Kash xx
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:04:00 PM
KASH, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3
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Date: 6/26/2013 4:55:00 PM
Kash , CONGRATULATIONS~ and thank you for enjoying my contest...I had much fun in closing my contest called ... ""A week into my poem""- Take care and enjoy my blog if you like... have yourself a lovely day.... LINDA
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Date: 5/4/2013 12:00:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem. great word skill
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Date: 4/20/2013 4:34:00 PM
Rereading this beauty
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Date: 4/16/2013 8:54:00 PM
oh my .....oh my.......this is so so good.... (I tried to start writing for this contest....and just couldn't find the proper way to start)...you make it look so effortless and natural.....and so absolutely beautiful. If this doesn't go straight to the top........I'll be amazed!
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Date: 4/16/2013 2:32:00 PM
whoot.. so intricately woven without forcing unnecessary words into this dainty poem... winning wishes... come visit.. will IM tomorrow..:) huggs!.
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Date: 4/12/2013 12:06:00 PM
this is nice ~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/11/2013 3:11:00 PM
love this, Kash. I didn't know about Calcutta's new name - cool that you live there : ) What's it like there? Is it just like any big city or is it full of culture, as I always picture it?
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Date: 4/11/2013 8:55:00 AM
Hi Kash, i just realized that I never replied to your welcoming me a while back. sorry didnt know how things worked around here then. Came here and read your most beautiful poem. truly a brilliant write especially considering the guidlines. you are a true poet. Bless You!
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Date: 4/8/2013 8:28:00 PM
It must have taken you a while to come up with this gem, Kash. This is what is called poetry. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:43:00 AM
sent soupmail
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:40:00 AM
Ah Kash, you are far too kind, saying what you did of my entry-- thank you although methinks yours and a couple of others I have read definitely belong to the top...read your comments below, I think we have here a winner ;) -- I will be a copycat to Missy below and also give you a smile for saying I am missed here :) -- I just saw your comment-- if I soupmail you, and you reply there, I can receive it. Wait up. lemme soupmail you
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:28:00 AM
Hi Kash, first a :) just because you miss me, sorry for my absence of late.. Hope you are doing okay. As for this awesome piece? I wish you all the best for the contest *hugs*
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Date: 4/7/2013 11:00:00 AM
Hi there Kash! Andrea told me to pass by your entry to David's contest... and I totally agree with her-- you did an amazing job! You definitely were successful in including your romantic flair in your entry, so great that you did-- Really enjoyed how this flowed, too! Way to go for this wonderful entry, Kash!
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Date: 4/5/2013 6:03:00 PM
Full of passion, romance, and the magic of sweet love. Excellent write Kash, I love it! Hugs
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Date: 4/3/2013 8:06:00 PM
Wow........I can't help wonder how long, and how hard this was to do! It is perfectly wonderful, Kash! I haven't tackled this contest yet......but can't imagine anyone doing a better poem than this! Wow!!
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Date: 4/3/2013 6:13:00 AM
Beautiful..beautiful...just beautiful..thanks Kash :-)
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